As the paper that I will edit in my portfolio project, I will use my literary analysis. It seems to be my greatest success thus far, so I will have a good time editing it. Also, there is room for improvement, as always, and this is another reason for me to edit this paper.
In this paper, I will focus on my word choice, as that is my strongest area in writing, and my voice, as that is my weakest point. I have chosen my strongest and weakest point as focal points because I would like to improve the weak parts of my paper, and at the same time reinforce what I am already good at.
Richard, this doesn't reflect my comments or rubric marks on your paper at all. Please make sure that you are responding to feedback in your revision. While I see why you chose the literary analysis, I think your research paper is still a better candidate for a strong and thorough revision.
ReplyDeleteAlso, remember a paragraph should be a minimum of five sentences.